Title, place, and opinion on my novel? calling professional authors and READERS lol?

The title should be the last thing you write in your book because you're going to draw the title from a line in the story. It also doesn't sound like you have a problem for your story. Make sure you write down precisely what Jill's problem is that she needs to solve in the story. This is your story's comp and it will help you write a much better novel.